Saturday, June 13, 2009

What Exactly Is Holding Us Back?o1.

Okay. Since quizilla is being such a butt-head, I decided to write my story here. Don't worry, it's not that long. I think. I'd appreciate it if you gave me positive criticism and your reactions on the story. Thank you.

♥CHAPTER 1 ♥
She’s Everything I Ask For and Just A Little Bit More

He held me close as I lean on the railings of the deck. It was like ‘The Titanic’ except I was no Rose and he was no Jack, but it feels like this is right. I stretched out my hands and he held my hands.

“Am I dreaming?” I asked.
“No darling. This is not a dream. Come closer, I’ll let your confusion go away.” He said.

Then, he gently touched my face and moved it closer to his. I was shocked, I stepped back. He looked at me, confused and asked what’s wrong.

“N-n-nothing. I just thought you were about to…k-k-kiss me.” I stuttered.
“Hell no! I was about to…” He looked pale. “To…to…wipe…your tears? Yeah! That’s right! To wipe your tears!” He gave an awkward laugh.

More tears started to fall from my eyes. I took another step back, wishing it would end. Then I felt cold air pushing me down so hard, I feel like I’m floating in the water. I was slowly losing consciousness then I realized I fell from…the ship…while I’m…with…him.

I want…to…stay…with him...with…my Derek.

Forever.

© Gabrielle.



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